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 Reshoma Kujaka: Zanpokutou (finished)

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PostSubject: Reshoma Kujaka: Zanpokutou (finished)   Sat Sep 22, 2012 1:54 pm

~Zanpakuto Information~

Name: Senjaka Senkita
Sealed Appearance:

Type: Unkown

Release Phrase: Cut through, break apart, and shatter, "Senjaka Senkita

~Shikai Information~

Shikai Appearance: In sealed appearance picture

Shikai Abilities:
1: Kagame burakkuhooru (mirror black hole): This ability allows him to create a max of four mirrors. The mirrors are 10 feet tall and 6 feet wide. He has control over all of the mirrors but he does not have to use all 4 at the same time. The ability each of the mirrors give is the same. From an area of 30 feet in front of the mirror a quick burst of air pressure and gravity forces everything out of that 30 feet. Even an opponent just a little stronger than Reshoma will be trow out any opponent above that it will not effect. Each mirror lasts 3 posts, after that a cool down of 2 for that mirror is used.


Shikai Techniques:
Technique Name: Mirror Burst
Type: Unkown
Range: all around
Duration: 1 Post
Description:
If needed Reshoma can cause one of his mirrors to burst into pieces of glass fused with reiatsu, causing the glass to become as strong and hard as a Zanpokuto blade. The glass is shot towards his opponent, it will chase the opponent for 1 posts after that it fades away.

Technique Name: Mirror Prison
Type: Unkown
Range: Large
Duration: Limitless
Description:
All of his mirrors shatter, then 6 mirrors appear. One above Reshoma and his opponent, one below. Then 4 around both of them making a square. Then all of the mirrors start spinning around for 1 post. Then on the next post a giant glass mirror ball appears around Reshoma and his opponent. As long as Reshoma stays in the ball his opponent must stay as well. If the opponent gets out of the glass ball before it closes, then it will close on Reshoma and he will be able to keep safe for a bit or just snap his finger and cause the mirror to fall apart. If he was to die while in the ball, it would never fade away. This ability is pretty much made to keep others out and post pone a coming tragedy. Someone of of far higher power this ability will not effect. The max of people it can keep in is 2, Reshoma and his opponent. If Reshoma is to use this ability and then leave from it, he will not be able to use any of his mirror abilities, unless he enters bankai.

Technique Name: Mirror Hole
Type: Unkown
Range: Large
Duration: 5 posts
Description:
This technique is activated by Reshoma sending one mirror away from the battle. The mirror cracks in the middle, and a small black hole appears. It slowly grows larger. But why that time of growing large reitsu is being Absorbed. The reitsu is not being sucked away but instead it is being sent directly into Reshoma's body. The whole time this is going one Reshoma does not use any of his reitsu but instead he uses the reitsu from the mirror. For 5 posts the mirror stays active after that the mirror bursts into pieces. The mirror gets its energy from the area, you can draw in reitsu from just about everywhere, so this mirror does the same. Just for an example after a kidou is used and it hits the ground the reitsu fades away and vanishes, it spreads out, well that kidou left reitsu in the air. So reitsu is everywhere, thats where the mirror draws in its energy. The reitsu that is drawn in is then transformed into energy for attacks such as kidou.

There is one other way this ability can be used but after being used the mirror is destroyed and can not be used for 6 posts. For that 1 time a mirror can be placed in front of Reshoma, the black hole in the middle of the mirror absorbs 1 reitsu blast. The level of power the mirror can absorb goes all the way up to Hado #89.
~Bankai Information~
Bankai Name: Senjaka Sonjuraku

Bankai Appearance:
His Shikai shatters in tiny pieces of glass. When his hand becomes empty, 7 mirror form over his head, 1 above his head, and three on each side of that mirror. These mirrors are 15 feet tall, and 10 feet wide. They look like the same mirrors from before, but they appear to shine bright white.

Bankai Abilities:
These mirrors have the same ability as Reshoma's Shikai ability. Except they do not have a time limit, they last for the whole battle. They can be destroyed, but in users next posting turn the mirror will appear again. He also keeps all the techniques he used in shikai.
Bankai Techniques:

Technique Name: Holly Mirror Ragnarok: heavenly halo
Type: Unkown
Range: small, medium, large
Duration: 1 post
Description:
With the flick of a finger Reshoma will cause one of his mirrors to explode. Causing a large area to explode with the size of 20 feet wide and long. The explosions damage comes from pieces of glass fused with Reiatsu shoots out. The damage will cause large deep cuts to anything in the 20 feet. Can only be used every 3 posts.

Technique Name: Holly Mirror Ragnarok: Heavenly implode
Type: Unkown
Range: small, medium, large
Duration: 1 post
Description: With the flick of a finger Reshoma causes a mirror to be sucked inwards. Imploding everything with in 20 feet. The area will be sucked in causing everything in that 20 feet to be broken and torn in the process. Can only be used every 3 posts.

Technique Name: Holy Mirror Ragnarok: God rapture
Type: Unkown
Range: small, medium, large
Duration: 1 post
Description: A mirror is sent in front of an on coming reiatsu based attack. In the process the mirror is destroyed but it captures the attack inside. This is done by the mirror sucking the attack in, though a black hole in the center of the mirror. This technique can capture reiatsu based attacks who's power is about equal to that of a hado #90. If this is used then a cool down of 3 posts is used for that mirror.

Technique Name: Holy Mirror Ragnarok: Gods finger snap
Type: Unkown
Range: small, medium, large
Duration: 1 post
Description:
This is Reshoma's bankai's ultimate technique. A small mirror appears anywhere on the battle field. With a snap of Reshoma's finger, the mirror will implode and an area up to half a mile will have such a mighty pull of energy shooting up that everything in that area is destroyed and shot upward with a large blast of White reiatsu. This attack has so much energy put into it that its effect can be felt miles away. Reshoma can double the size of the area of effect, but with a cost that causes him to be sent out of bankai and out of his shikai. With just using its half a miles effects it has a cool down of 6 posts. With its power being so strong, it causes a heavy drain of reiatsu on the user. After the technique has finished, a hole in the ground will appear about 5 miles deep from the effects of the blast.

~Spirit Information~
Appearance:


Personality: She is rather quiet and calm. She is always sweet and give's Reshoma a kiss when she see's him. You could say their relationship could be more if she was around all the time. She never hesitates to tell Reshoma she loves him and calls him sweetness. She often gets jealous though. Even though she is sealed she knows Reshoma is talking to other women, and she yells and screams at Reshoma when this happens.

Inner World:
The inner world of Reshoma's Zanpokuto is a confusing one. The ground of the area is like a swamp but you can walk on it. The swampy trees are up-side down, and the area is covered in mist, but this mist comes from the sky in this world. It has been shown that senjaka has the ability to twist this world around as she wanted.


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PostSubject: Re: Reshoma Kujaka: Zanpokutou (finished)   Sun Sep 23, 2012 5:51 am

Cofang wrote:
Technique Name: Mirror Prison
Type: Unkown
Range: Large
Duration: Limitless
Description:
All of his mirrors shatter, then 6 mirrors appear. One above Reshoma and his opponent, one below. Then 4 around both of them making a square. Then all of the mirrors start spinning around for 1 post. Then on the next post a giant glass mirror ball appears around Reshoma and his opponent. As long as Reshoma stays in the ball his opponent must stay as well. If he was to die while in the ball, it would never fade away. This ability is pretty much made to keep others out and post pone a coming tragedy. Someone of of far higher power this ability will not effect. The max of people it can keep in is 2, Reshoma and his opponent. If Reshoma is to use this ability and then leave from it, he will not be able to use any of his mirror abilities, unless he enters bankai.

This is an autohit ability, so it's gotta be changed. Mainly the part in red. From the way it is described, it leaves no choice but for those effected but to be captured.

Cofang wrote:
Technique Name: Mirror Hole
Type: Unkown
Range: Large
Duration: 5 posts
Description:
This technique is activated by Reshoma sending one mirror away from the battle. The mirror cracks in the middle, and a small black hole appears. It slowly grows larger. But why that time of growing large Reiatsu is being Absorbed. The Reiatsu is not being sucked away but instead it is being sent directly into Reshoma's body. The whole time this is going one Reshoma does not use any of his Reiatsu but instead he uses the Reiatsu from the mirror. For 5 posts the mirror stays active after that the mirror bursts into pieces.

Where is this thing getting energy from?

Cofang wrote:
Technique Name: 3 Holy techniques
Type: Unkown
Range: small, medium, large
Duration: 1 post
Description:
Mirror blast- With the flick of a finger Reshoma will cause one of his mirrors to explode. Causing a large area to explode with the size of 20 feet wide and long. The explosions damage comes from pieces of glass fused with Reiatsu shoots out. The damage will cause large deep cuts to anything in the 20 feet. Can only be used every 3 posts.

Mirror implode- With the flick of a finger Reshoma causes a mirror to be sucked inwards. Imploding everything with in 20 feet. The area will be sucked in causing everything in that 20 feet to be broken and torn in the process. Can only be used every 3 posts.

Mirror Capture- A mirror is sent in front of an on coming reiatsu based attack. In the process the mirror is destroyed but it captures the attack inside. This is done by the mirror sucking the attack in, though a black hole in the center of the mirror. This technique can capture reiatsu based attacks who's power is about equal to that of a hado #90. If this is used then a cool down of 3 posts is used for that mirror.

You have three options here. Split this up so that it's three different techniques, add in a crazy reuse time, or we can make you a dice roll system so that the effect is totally random and based upon your roll.

Cofang wrote:
Technique Name: Holy Mirror Ragnarok: Gods finger snap
Type: Unkown
Range: small, medium, large
Duration: 1 post
Description:
This is Reshoma's bankai's ultimate technique. A small mirror appears anywhere on the battle field. With a snap of Reshoma's finger, the mirror will implode and an area up to half a mile will have such a mighty pull of energy shooting up that everything in that area is destroyed and shot upward with a large blast of White reiatsu. This attack has so much energy put into it that its effect can be felt miles away. Reshoma can double the size of the area of effect, but with a cost that causes him to be sent out of bankai and out of his shikai. With just using its half a miles effects it has a cool down of 6 posts. With its power being so strong, it causes a heavy drain of reiatsu on the user. After the technique has finished, a hole in the ground will appear about 5 miles deep from the effects of the blast.

Hesitant, but I suppose your drawbacks are acceptable. Just keep in mind that people will find ways to either survive or avoid this.

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Also, the ranges. I need actual ranges not just short, medium, and long. Use feet, meters, whatever you feel like using.

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PostSubject: Re: Reshoma Kujaka: Zanpokutou (finished)   Sun Sep 23, 2012 6:35 am

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PostSubject: Re: Reshoma Kujaka: Zanpokutou (finished)   Sun Sep 23, 2012 3:05 pm

Still think the point was missed, but talked it over with a consultant of mine. Seems it checks out okay.

Got my vote for a yes. Just need one more approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Reshoma Kujaka: Zanpokutou (finished)   Sun Sep 23, 2012 3:14 pm

APPROVED

OOC toppic to seal the deal

this can either be a spar with a staff member at 6 posts (of hostile actions) of your choice or a mission that will be assigned by a staff member and be RP'd outby yourself

the choice is yours Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Reshoma Kujaka: Zanpokutou (finished)   Sun Dec 02, 2012 3:08 pm

Blank.


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PostSubject: Re: Reshoma Kujaka: Zanpokutou (finished)   Sun Dec 02, 2012 3:47 pm

I didn't even read that entire post to be honest. When I first joined it was YOU, Arakasi, who was beyond OP. So don't presume that you can stroll in here NOW of all times and start pointing fingers at other people claiming something is OP. I don't wanna fucking hear it. Not to mention that any problem YOU could possibly point out has already been addressed in some way shape or form.


Also, you have zero clearance to post on this application, or any application for that matter, that is not your own. So whatever reasoning you HAD (past tense because it hold zero value as of 5 minutes ago) to post in an area that you have no business posting in, can be returned to whatever silly little wonderland it spawned from.

If memory serves, and trust me...it does, you had your chance to go on your little power trip. Maybe as an Admin you had some length on your leash to do so, and decent sized fangs to flash. After all, you were a higher-up, we were just members. How dare we say no to you! But I did. And now the cards on the table are in my favor, babydoll. So do myself, and everyone else here, a favor: mind your manners, and play by the rules that are now in place.

Such as you not posting on other members' applications.


Have a delightful day, afternoon, or evening. Depending upon what time you read this.


Oh. P.S. I'm editing your message since...well it doesn't belong here. If you REALLY feel strongly about what it is you wish to convey, use the PM function to contact myself or Mage about it. Or drop a message in the chatbox since I'm not sure if Mage ever gave you back your PM rights. Doesn't matter to me either way, to be honest.

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PostSubject: Re: Reshoma Kujaka: Zanpokutou (finished)   Sun Dec 02, 2012 4:10 pm

in addition to Val's statement

Bleach Clash has an obvious aray of characters that would be considered OP on other sites. However that is other sites, BC is aiming now to set the bar higher (RP wise) by staff ensuring that characters balance for THEIR rank and has obvious flaws in abilities. This not only allows for RP'ers veteran or new to take part and still be in with a chance but allows for more flexibility when creating your belovid character as well as providing a challenge for every wordsmith. But yes there are still rules to be followed as with everywere else

As for the joyous bleach lore most of it is in place but some of it we have scrapped simply because it is fun Razz

Also i can be contacted by e-mail @ bleachclash@hotmail.co.uk if need be. i shall respond once i read it

Never the less welcome back. Happy RP'ing Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Reshoma Kujaka: Zanpokutou (finished)   Sun Dec 02, 2012 6:31 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Reshoma Kujaka: Zanpokutou (finished)   Mon Dec 03, 2012 1:47 am

Changed that message too. What part of don't post here isn't getting through to you? Apparently all of it.


Do. Not. Post. On. Other. Applications.

This is the last time I want to see you posting on an app. Next time WILL result in a 24 hour ban.


P.S. Didn't read that post either. Just changed it.

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