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PostSubject: Shikaruni Hiei    Tue Mar 20, 2012 3:02 pm

~Character Information~
Name: Shikaruni Hiei
Nickname/Alias:Kage Odoriko (Shadow Dancer)
Gender: Male
Height: 5'09''
Weight: 160 pounds
Age 1037 / 28-32

Appearance:
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Clothing: Hiei dresses much like you would expect a thirty something business man. Normally always seen in a black suit, his general attire is one of intellect and sophitication. His trousers reach down to just beneath his ankle, covering up the top of this black shoes. The trousers are fitted well, hanging loosely and straight down his leg. The white shirt he wears is normally undone, although if he is trying to make an impression it'll be buttoned up and with a tie reaching down to his waist. Over this he normally wears a black blazer. He is also regulary seen in a leather coat with a grey furry underside, although only if he knows he will spend a lot of time outside. His eye's are always covered by a pair of red tinted sunglasses.

Personality: Hiei. The Shadow Dancer. A man who spends his life in darkness surely burns with the brightest light. Within this man you may find your mortal enemy or your greatest friend.

Hiei is a confident individual in everything he does. From women to fighting the strongest of enemies, Hiei almost oozes with an arrogance that would be misplaced for even the most experienced Captain. In battle, he constantly pushes his opponent to reveal their true strength. He desires to fight people at their strongest, even if they are stronger than him. And even with that difference, he still believes he will walk away the victor. This kind of mentality is spread across all his attributes. If he is after something, he will obtain it.

When first met, he is generally either incredibly cold, incredibly flirtacious or mocking you. This is seemingly a defensive wall that can eventually be broken down. Once this is done Hiei would become a true friend and great ally. Get on his wrong side and you will feel the wrath of a true shadowy demon.

Inner peace. Something Hiei seems to oddly efficient at. At all times he is thinking calmly through the situation, reacting as he sees fit. Due to this he can almost read people like a book. He knows how to push peoples buttons, or how to get on their good side. Capable of making a tough decision at a much faster rate than other people, some consider him a genius while others consider him a mad man. This nature he carries into battle.

He is a man who likes to give into his desires. As such, he is classified as evil by some people. If he desires to kill someone, he shall do it. If he desires to have another by his side, he shall obtain it. Such is the way of this Visored.

If an enemy: Hiei is relentless. He will do anything and everything he can to totally annihilate them. He mocks his opponent constantly whilst calmly and instinctively defending himself, indicating he has been fighting for so long it has become second nature to him. If not in battle, he will still mock them. Insult them. Belittle them.

If an Ally: If he considers you an ally, he will jump in himself to defend you. However, if he feels it would harm those he considers friends, he will let you die.

If a friend: You have a true friend in Hiei. He will die for someone he considers a friend.

If a stranger: If he doesn't know you, no matter what race, and is pulled into battle, he will continuously try and push you. To release your true power within. He is more likely to assist a Shinigami in this way than a Hollow, however.

~Abilities and Skills~
Speciality:
Zanjutsu Master: Hiei is what people would consider "One with the blade". At such a level he is considered a master of the art. His sheer skill with his Zanpakuto is at a level where Bankai is nearly effortless. That is, if he needs to use it. He is seemingly capable of utilizing his techniques without thought as well, proving that he has truly mastered his Zanpakuto.

Hoho Master: As the former leader of the Omnisukido, Hiei's speed is almost unmatchable. Capable of moving great distances in a single Shunpo at speeds almost unseen, he combines this with his swordplay to create for a very lethal fighter.

Deadly Calm: His mind remains calm in all situations. This is made all the deadlier by combining this with his brilliant mind. He tends to remain a step ahead of his opponents, almost as if he knows what they're doing before they do. He is calm enough to take note of any unusual movements or facial expressions on the target, giving him the edge in a fight.

Abilities:
  • Strengths

Constantly in a state of calmness
Excellent Battle Mind
One of the fastest Shinigami to ever live
Incredibly skilled in Zanjutsu


  • Weaknesses

Arrogance
Lack of Kido
Nearly always gives into his primal desires
Incredibly thick outer shell
Likely to make an opponent use their full strength against him, creating for a potentially life threatening situation

Rank: Former: Omnisukido Leader / Captain of Squad 2

~Character History~
Before Death Arc:

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After Death Arc
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Academy Arc
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Second Division: Working up the Ranks Arc
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Ban-Kai! The Fifth Step
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Arc Six: Bloodlust and Desire
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Captaincy, and a new goal
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Becoming the Beast Arc
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Final Arc - The Shinigami's End
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RP Sample
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~Zanpakuto Information~

Name: Kuroikiri Shikaku (Black Mist Assassin)
Appearance: In its sealed state, Hiei's Zanpakuto is relatively normal. A black hilt with a sixty centimeter long blade reaching from the top of the hilt. The blades with is around an inch.However, there are a couple of irregularities with it. Firstly, the hilt is covered with a white cloth. Seemingly only for decoration.
Type: Reiryoku

~Shikai Information~
Appearance Upon releasing his Shikai, Hiei's Zanpakuto takes on a rather large transformation. It grows another twenty centimeters in length and doubling in width. The hilt changes the most. It changes into a redish black coloring. At the top of the hilt is a pair of teeth which chatter constantly, as well as constantly spewing out a black mist.
Abilities:

  • Passive:


Ability Name: Kuriokiri (Black Mist)
Type: Reiryoku
Range: The mist fills an area of 10m cubed around Hiei.
Duration: Until Shikai has ended.
Once his Zanpakuto is released and Hiei's Reiryoku flows through it, it begins to release a large amount of thick black mist. This mist cannot be seen through from the outside, and cannot be seen out of from the inside. As such, entering the mist is like entering a completely different battlefield. This mist is the vessel of all Hiei's active abilities.


Ability Name: Keigai (Wreck)
Type: Reiryoku
Range: Long
Duration: -
Keigai is a passive ability which is linked to the Kuroikiri. Whenever the user causes damage with their sword on an opponent, Keigai activates automatically. The black mist from the sword pushes itself into the opponents body through their wounds. While this can only be done from within the black mist, it is highly unlikely Hiei will step out from it, thus making this happen almost constantly. This then begins to cause the "Daraku" effect.

Daraku (Corruption): After receiving three slashes from Hiei's Zanpakuto, this effect becomes very noticeable. Daraku, as the name suggests, begins to corrupt the opponents Reiryoku. It makes it harder for them to use their abilities, thus making their abilities use much more Reiryoku than normal. This creates an accelerated exhaustion effect. The more hits after the third, the more rapid the draining will become. After seven slashes, it is likely that a Captain wouldn't be able to use Bankai due to the strain.

  • Active:


Ability Name: Kageshura (Shadow Dance)
Type: Movement
Range: Anywhere within the mist
Duration: 3 posts / 3 post cooldown after Kageshura has ended.
The Kageshura is Hiei's signature technique. As such, it is one of his most used. Upon activation, the user can become part of the black mist at will. They become an intangible mass which can flow through the mist with perfect precision. Hiei tends to slip in and out of intangibility to create multiple attacks and form almost unreadable attack maneuvers. Thus, the name of the Kageshura was born.

Ability Name: Burikka-dou (Flicker Motion)
Type: Melee
Range: Swing of the sword
Duration: -
The Burikka-dou is essentially a lower level of the Kageshura. Upon swinging the sword, the user can at any time turn their arm and sword into the black mist and change the direction of their attack. However, such a maneuver is dangerous and unforgiving. Using this technique more than twice in a battle will rip the muscles in the arm, leaving it unusable for the rest of the battle.


~Bankai Information~
Appearance Once Bankai has been released, all the black mist returns to the sword. After this is done, a large explosion of sheer Reiatsu busts from Hiei's location. This explosion creates considerably more mist than it absorbed. The sword and Hiei do not change at all in Bankai.
Abilities:
  • Passive:


Ability Name: Oni Kuriokiri (Demon Black Mist) - Shikai Upgrade
Type: Reiryoku
Range: The mist fills an area of 30m cubed around Hiei.
Duration: Until Bankai has ended.
Once Bankai is released Hiei's Reiryoku flows through it. Due to a much larger degree of Reiryoku due to this release, an explosion is caused which will push away anyone near him. This mist cannot be seen through from the outside, and cannot be seen out of from the inside. As such, entering the mist is like entering a completely different battlefield. This mist is the vessel of all Hiei's active abilities. Within this mist, anyone besides Hiei has to deal with a lower amount of Oxygen, the mist itself feeding from it. As such, most would quickly feel incredibly 'off' while dealing with this. Extended time spent inside will cause Hypoxia.

Ability Name: Keigai (Wreck) - Retained from Shikai
Type: Reiryoku
Range: Long
Duration: -
Keigai is a passive ability which is linked to the Kuroikiri. Whenever the user causes damage with their sword on an opponent, Keigai activates automatically. The black mist from the sword pushes itself into the opponents body through their wounds. While this can only be done from within the black mist, it is highly unlikely Hiei will step out from it, thus making this happen almost constantly. This then begins to cause the "Daraku" effect.

Daraku (Corruption): After receiving three slashes from Hiei's Zanpakuto, this effect becomes very noticeable. Daraku, as the name suggests, begins to corrupt the opponents Reiryoku. It makes it harder for them to use their abilities, thus making their abilities use much more Reiryoku than normal. This creates an accelerated exhaustion effect. The more hits after the third, the more rapid the draining will become. After seven slashes, it is likely that a Captain wouldn't be able to use Bankai due to the strain.

  • Active:

Hiei retains all techniques from his Shikai in Bankai, as well as gaining the following techniques:

Ability Name: Infest (Can't find a Japanese translation =/)
Type: Reiryoku
Range: Anywhere within the Black Mist. Target must be affected by Corruption.
Duration: 3 posts to catch the target.
Hiei's most damaging ability. In order to activate this technique, the target he wishes to use it on must be affected by the Corruption effect and within the black mist. When Hiei speaks the word "Infest", the black mist rises and forms above his head. Then it targets the corrupted victim, chasing them and quickly engulfing them in the mist. The mist then enters the targets body through any possible entry location. Eye's, nose, ears, mouth and even the lower regions are targetted. Once all the Mist is within the opponent, it forces itself out, working much like a Cero from within. This essentially causes the target to become a living bomb. After two posts, the pressure becomes too much and the explosion goes off. If the opponent is hit by this, the damage is severe. It is unlikely that they will be able to continue battle at a level anywhere near where they were performing before. If the target isn't infested within 3 posts, the mist returns to Hiei. This technique can only be used twice per fight.


Ability Name: Airo (Defile)
Type: Reiryoku
Range: Mist
Duration: 3 posts
Airo is an odd technique in application for this Zanpakuto. Odd in the sense it changes the mists form from that of, well, mist, to a black water. The mist changes to this state and falls to the floor, looking almost like tar. The effects of the mist disappear for the duration, although corruption effects still linger. This water becomes the battlefield where Hiei stays. He can cause the water to form into spikes and slash at an opponent standing within it, capable of attacking from eight directions at once, albeit all coming from the floor. These spikes can reach up to three meters. They can also wrap around the opponent if the user so desires, thus making for a trap as well as an attack. After three posts the water rises and forms into the Black Mist once more.


Ability Name: Shiryou (Feed)
Type: Reiryoku
Range: Hiei's Zanpakuto
Duration: 4 posts - 3 post cooldown after duration.
Hiei places his fingers upon the base of the mouth on his Zanpakuto and speaks the word "Shiryou". The chattering then stops, as the mouth opens fully and sucks up the black mist, removing its abilities from play for the duration. With this, a redish black glow illuminates the blade. Upon every swing, black mist is released around Hiei once more. The mist is initially released as a cero-like attack made towards the opponent before it gathers itself up and returns to Hiei. The cutting power of the Zanpakuto is increased dramatically. This is an incredibly destructive ability, only able to be used twice per battle. After every post, 25% of the black mist is returned to the battlefield.


~Spirit Information~
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Personality: Kuroikiri Shikaku is a cold and calculating Zanpakuto spirit, almost to the point that one could almost already consider him an inner hollow. However, his loyalties clearly lie with Hiei. He is quite simply a being who wants to be the greatest assassin to ever live.

In general, he comes across as a bit of an asshole. Much like Hiei himself in fact. Life and death mean nothing to this creature, as long as he is being wielded by someone worthy of his abilities. As such he provides all the power he can give to Hiei in order to be considered the best.
Inner World: Hiei's inner world is quite odd. Quite odd indeed. It is an empty nothingness. Covered with the mist his Zanpakuto represents. Hiei assumes that this is because of the fact he considers his life fulfilled, and therefore has nothing he has to aim for.

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~Visored Information~

Mask Appearance: Hiei's mask could be considered relatively normal. Well, for a hollow mask that is. It is plain white, in the shape of a skull covering his face. A single black line goes horizontally across the face.

Mask Duration: ? - Please add for me, as I have no idea what you're expecting.

Additional Abilities:

Strength Augmentation: Once his mask is donned, Hiei's physical prowess is vastly improved. He appears to utilize Hakuda a lot when his mask is used due to this enhancement.

Reiryoku Augmentation: Upon donning his mask, Hiei's Reiryoku is then Augmented by Hollow Reiryoku. As such, his Reiatsu becomes a lot more intense.

Hollow Abilities:

Cero: Hiei gains the ability to use Cero when his mask is donned.

Strengths:
Frightening Reiryoku
Physical Strength

Weaknesses:
Only ranged technique is Cero.
Personality becomes more reckless. He tends to react on instinct rather than his calm persona when in this state.


Inner hollow
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Personality: Ieih is a rather malevolent being, more evil and twisted than even Hiei could ever hope to be. He is a true sadist, craving the cut of a blade upon his skin. To slice away across the neck of his enemies. To the point where it almost turns into a lustful obsession. And that is essentially it. He is a killing machine. Nothing more, nothing less.


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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Wed Mar 21, 2012 7:42 am

Squad 2 Captian is taken PLease try a Different spot. Thank you.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Wed Mar 21, 2012 11:55 am

ex squad 2 that is. and please dont fill apps with posts

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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Wed Mar 21, 2012 4:37 pm

I see one thing wrong with the history on how he became captain to be given the position and title of captain it has to be a official fight/spar with witnesses including at least one other captain. Otherwise it would be considered simple murder. Also in such a event as listed in your history your character would have been imprisoned as prime suspect if the captain didn't return.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Thu Mar 22, 2012 2:04 am

Can you lot seriously just let me finish this before posting? I mean seriously, it's a WIP. On the subject of how he became the Captain, he killed him in secret. Yes, he may have been the prime suspect. But people were informed that the two of them were heading out on a 'Secret Omnisukido Mission'. While he would indeed have been the number one suspect, there would also be a distinct lack of evidence. Due to that, I fail to see the need to go into great detail about the situation. He could have easily said they came up against an Adjuchas (Which are Captain level, fyi), and his Captain was killed. He had also been a Shinigami for near 500 years at that point, a couple of hundred at Lieutenant. A certain level of trust would be in there anyway, in order for them to believe his words. As such, he killed and waited a year before revealing his Bankai in the generic Captaincy test. Might they have suspicions? Yes. Could they prove ANYTHING that happened in Heuco Mundo? I do doubt that.

Essentially, the time line of this event, in the eye's of the Shinigami is: Hiei meets Captain > Hiei and Captain go on a mission in Heuco Mundo (According to Seireitei) > Hiei returns alone with clear signs of battle. Nothing else can be known for sure. There is no evidence to suggest he would be lying with any excuse he made. Heuco Mundo is a volatile place where even Captains could be killed. I ask you, who's more likely to kill a Shinigami Captain, a single Lieutenant or several Hollow of varying ranks?
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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:25 am

Hmm only wanted to get some clarification on your concept. It seems fine then. I'll look it over once you finish it either way it look good. Sorry if it made you angry just doing the job.

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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Thu Mar 22, 2012 1:56 pm

Nah it's not you doing it in particular. I just don't like having loads of stuff written on my apps before they're done, they distract me and make me not want to continue xD.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Sat Mar 24, 2012 2:52 pm

Right, this is done. Feel free to critique. I've chosen against the Res, Bankai + Mask should be enough *Winks*

Edit: History has been changed quite a bit. Should be read through again if you have already read this character sheet. Ideally from: Bloodlust and Desire
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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Sun Mar 25, 2012 2:27 pm

Seems fine from what I can tell so I guess I approve unless someone finds any major faults.

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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Tue Mar 27, 2012 11:30 am

infest:
could you reduce that to sevear damage

everything else appears to be in order

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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Tue Mar 27, 2012 11:45 am

once you change what is asked to change you can ask mage to make you a solo ooc rank topic or fight a admin/mod's lieutenant+ Character for such.

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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:06 pm

Changed infest. Updated Hollow Mask section with new template. Would like to be given a mask duration rather than give one of my own. And I'll fight whoever wants to fight me. I have no preference.
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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:14 pm

hmm well you still have to pick someone at the least ask mage who is free to do the fight with you.

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PostSubject: Re: Shikaruni Hiei    Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:17 am

*Shrugs* Mara I guess.
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